Elephant Festival in Jaipur, India
At part of our topic - "Making connections to the world" - We looked at the Elephant Festival in Jaipur, India.
We were fascinated and decided to do some descriptive writing about the pictures above. After writing we did some art work as well!
Enjoy our work!
"When it moves, the jewellery shines in the sky" (Cole)
"The elephant is like an exploding bucket full of different colours" (Leila)
"Wow! Every time I see the elephant I can't take my eyes off it" (Sumaya)
"The elephant is colourful and it looks like it has lots of patterns on its back" (Zion)
"The majestic jewellery dazzled Indian elephant walked happily at the festival" (Licha)
"Have you ever seen an elephant with make up on? Or a cape"? (Essa)
"There is a flurry of colours, the seven colours of the rainbow" (Kosha)
"On it's back, its like a flying carpet" (Washington)
"A purple wave of flowers covers its humongous back" (Francesca)
"The Indian elephant has purple nail polish on its toes" (Kairos)
"Not one looks the same, not even the tail" (Aaron)
"I can see a beautiful blanket on the elephant's back" (Lupe)
"The tusks are rainbow coloured and the mat looks like a shield" (Jayden)
"Pink, purple, yellow, gold - exploding in my eyes" (Cleo)
"An elephant is treasure. It is a beauty" (Mia)
"The elephants look dazzling" (Hibo)
"With all the good glory, it has some royalty" (Rico)
"It is like an amazing Queen Elephant" (Lorenzo)
"It is as still as a statue" (Questyn)
Those elephants are amazingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing. What fabulous writing you have created about the elephants, Room 25! Very evocative language (that means it gives me a picture in my mind). Maybe you could put some of your art work on the blog, too!
ReplyDeleteHi, Room 25. I like the bright colours on the elephants.I like it because it looks like a rainbow. Did you guys paint that as your artwork?
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ReplyDeleteHi Mr Greenfield and Jodie
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment! It makes us happy to know that someone loves our writing and pictures as much as we do!
You said that we used evocative language in our writing - That made us feel good because our writing goals were to use at least 2 WOW words and go back to our writing and change one sentence starter to make it more interesting
We hope you have a nice week!
From Room 25